Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Woman Enough -Erica Jong

Because my grandmother's hours
were apple cakes baking,
& dust motes gathering,
& linens yellowing
& seams and hems
inevitably unraveling
I almost never keep house
though really I like houses
& wish I had a clean one.

Because my mother's minutes
were sucked into the roar
of the vacuum cleaner,
because she waltzed with the washer-dryer
& tore her hair waiting for repairmen
I send out my laundry,
& live in a dusty house,
though really I like clean houses
as well as anyone.

I am woman enough
to love the kneading of bread
as much as the feel
of typewriter keys
under my fingers
springy, springy.
& the smell of clean laundry
& simmering soup
are almost as dear to me
as the smell of paper and ink.

I wish there were not a choice;
I wish I could be two women.
I wish the days could be longer.
But they are short.
So I write while
the dust piles up.

I sit at my typewriter
remembering my grandmother
& all my mothers,
& the minutes they lost
loving houses better than themselves
& the man I love cleans up the kitchen
grumbling only a little
because he knows
that after all these centuries
it is easier for him
than for me


In the poem Woman Enough even though Erica mentions that she does not follow the footsteps of her grandmother and mother, she still consider herself woman enough to make her own decisions. For this poem by Erica it would be consider to be a free verse poem, since it doe not contain any pattern of stressed or unstressed syllables. The poem would be in a structure of a cause and effect structure, because her mother and grandmother spent the majority of their life cooking and baking ; she is unable to keep her own house clean , rather the dusty. The word" dust" gives us an idea that her house is dirty. A good example of imagery and touch would in stanza 3 " love the kneading of bread as much as the feel of typewriter keys under my fingers" as well as " the smell of clean laundry & simmering soup... The smell of ink and paper". In stanza 
2 we can see an example of personification "my mother minutes were sucked into the roar of the vacuum cleaner, because she waltzed with the washer - dryer" The tone would be determined in my option as she has chosen things that she rather do and enjoys it. Instead then stay like her mother and do the typical woman work she wants to do something new that is a passion towards her.




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